Yus!
Viper the cat rules the day! Great flash, very well put togeather.
Reviews for "Le Petit Americain Ep. 2"
An excellent flash, but there's something missing:
An interesting core at the center of it all. Even though your animation, voices, music selections and pacing were really great, and certainly enough to hold my interest, I just didn't feel like there was an actual story behind it all. Although this flash is very good as it is, most of its humour relied not on what happened in the actual story but on the various colourfull diversions from it, and I think that it would be better if should you choose to make another flash, you try and make the actual story itself be the cause for more of the humour.
I also have to say that I found the whole concept to be a little... bizarre. Is it supposed to be making some point, or is it mainly for laughs?
That's all I have to say really. It's definitely better than the last episode (which was good but felt a little stretched).
epyon5 responds:
An awesome critique! Thanks for taking the time to watch and write. Their's not really a point to this episode except that we're just trying to introduce and familiarize everybody with the Youngbody family. Ep. 1 was about Robert, ep.2 the family, ep. 3 will be about an adventure with Viper (he seems to be a favorite) While ep. 4 will finally start to have more of story feel to it. It will focus on Travis coming to accept Robert as his new brother. As for the bizarre feel to it, that's what I love. My collaborator David is a fantastic writer with a whimisical and imaginative charm that is remeniscant of Wes Anderson's style of writing.
I don't like the style
The opening joke was good though
Keep 'em Coming
I love it! I don't know why....but I do.
nice
pretty good. nothing else to say......