now thats better man
hey i blammed ur past submissions b4...but dude...u finally did it! i can bet with ya this will not be in the orbituary for sure man...great and i mean GREAT improvement
Reviews for "Pop-Tarts"
theimpetus369 responds:
Thanks so much man. to tell you the truth i didn't think it would pass.
Kid, you got alot of talent
Hey you've got alot of talent and I thik that your older movies that I helped blam have finally paid off because that was good, and for deleting all of those, I gave you a break and gave you a 5, if I didn't know any better, this is gonna be your first flash on your profile under your movies, good work.
And so he ate the poptart
Loved the theme.
that was kind of original.
fine animation
It was decent..
I can see you are pretty good at Flash -- a few of the scenes in that movie were impressive. But I'm sure you could have done a better job. Perhaps add some sound effects instead of just music? And the "Pop-Tart" monsters would have been more interesting if they were something unique. A "3d" ball with a mouth is nothing new.
Anyway, I think this does deserve a place on Newgrounds. But keep practicing!
LMAO
god that was halarious dam this was funny and a good movie of course the graphics wern't exactly the best