cliche
i'm going to put aside my personal feelings about emo...
here's the whole storyline
boy loves girl, boy loses girl, boy kills self
the storyline is so incredibly cliched. nothing new, nothing interesting, nothing that makes it stick out from the 10 million other love stoies submitted to this portal. Only good thing i have to say is the artwork is done well. But try stepping out of such an overused topic
Thanks, I appreciate advice rather than abuse.
Fck off Emo`s
well first of all the story sucked!(oh no she said no cuz im a emo fag i guess i`ll kill myself cuz its the end of my life and i cant live without her!) who ever thinks like that needs to die! and thats why i like hard-core emo`s cuz i know that there going to take there depression to a level that they want to kill them selfz! Listin man or girl all you emos look alike. if your going to make some stipid ass flash make it where it has some good stuff in it. At least let me see him cry! Or make him have a real reason to kill himself. like being traped under a rock in the middle of nowhere! Or if he`s about to me tortured and killed so he`ll kill himself so he doesn`t have to go though the pain. And if you want to show you "Emo" or pop with a gutar and even more make up. You have to make this peice of crap to a peice of dirt.
1. Make it longer
2. Put a story
3. Make it look alot better
4. Make a better reason for you to kill yourself
5. Take out the Pop music
6. Put some voices in
And if that doesn`t work out...well you can always cut yourself or stay home and make your punk wanabe soiled stay at home all day ass and come up with a few more childish things to be sad over.
Hrm..
"I absolutley positivily hate EMOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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all they do is whine and there high pitched girly screaming music is so stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1"
The guy before me hate's Emotions.. Well.. Yeah, I guess when you're sad Emotions suck.. But.. I never knew they could talk.. Or that ALL of them whined.. You moron.. Don't be an idiot because of some clique bullshit, and don't give a submission a bad score cause the name has a word you don't like..
Idiots of the world:
Please.. Chill out with your whole "Hate 'emo' kids" thing.. It's really annoying, I'm sure it stems from the fact that some 'whiney little punk' could get layed 10 times more than you yet doesn't because he has feelings and cares about people beyond such Trivial things as sex.. But what do I know, eh? Fucking morons..
emos suck
I absolutley positivily hate EMOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
all they do is whine and there high pitched girly screaming music is so stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
lol his shirt sayd emu
I like emus