Incomprehensible.
The art was fair, but the text just made no sense. Come to think of it, the movie itself didn't make much sense. But regardless of all that, PLEASE SPEED THIS MOVIE UP. It's so mind-numbingly slow-paced, I almost turned it off.
A spell-checker would also help immensely.
I could see where your going
But your animation still needs work. At parts you were just lazy and made multiple few copies of an animation and had them working at the same time, it didn't look cool. If you keep working at it you could do some good. Just try not to make a movie of the year on your first try, it takes practice.
meh
you have spent alot of time on this flash buddy and I congratulate you for that but its so damn boring ! just make shorter flashes!
Rant time...
Wow... where to begin.... hmmm... i think i will start with elves, NO, TOO MANY ELFS already, second, "when elf dies his soul is merged with a blade" blade = braod term (kitchen knife lol) and worst prt is, living in a blade, wtf slef awareness but not being able to do anything all you get for the rest of eternity if to be swung around at people and crtures, or be left on a shelf, or be bumped around next to some sweaty guys ass on a long and perioulous journey.worse tan hell. three wtf is with the appaantly stolen sprites of that blue wizard with teh fireball, .. i have wayy too many probs w/ this flash, and btw, WAKE UP FROM YOUR ANIME FANTASY WORLD TO FACE REAL LIFE!
thanks you this helped me alot got me thinking on the story ad the show so thanks for this rant thanks to you my series i hope to do won't be so bad
Eh-hem
Numeral Uno
Spell check...
Yeah that would be nice
#2
Shorter and make it less monotone.
#3
Maybe a narrator for those who cant read and also it would make it Less Monotone. *see number 2.
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Good job