Asuka, Asuka, Asuka!
Great vid! Your drawings are excellent. The voices were great, nice and clear. When it paused for like 20 seconds that was a mistake right? Yeah, I hope you continue it.
Can't wait for the next episode!
Shikhei.
Reviews for "ArkAngel - Episode 1.1"
good
well it was all good :)
except for the sounds :s
it was kinda weird xD lol
Interesting but a little too much like Evangelion.
I enjoyed this short, but it felt too much like Evangelion. From the very long pause to the episode title, it just felt like,"been there, done that." Not to say there wasn't any effort put into this, it has potential but try and ease off the Evangelion influences.
Otherwise, it's an interesting start to a hopefully good series.
7/10
Lets Break it down...
Ok im gonna be critical so just bare with me. The graphics were above average, considering all the characters with the exception of the main character (which I honestly thought was a girl until he started talking) were either traced from or copied from Evangelion but hey Evangelion rocks so not really complaining too much there.
Sound wise it was ok. There were very few back ground sounds and those that you did have were pretty bad (example: the laughing students after the main character is tripped by the Asuka clone) However the voice acting especially that done by Kagome :) was exceptional so it makes up for the sound effects.
Finally I really hate to do this but being a writer myself I just cant let it slide, your script sucked. The lines for the characters were generic and boring (thank god the voice actors were good). I can understand that this is just the opening episode so things start off slow, but there really should be some kind of hook that will keep people interested so they will watch the next episode.
All in all it was pretty dang good but hey its Evangelion (the boring parts but still Eva) and Evangelion kicks butt.
dot dot dot
I like it but... i think you could do much more. You got a lot of talent, use it to the maximum. Overall good job there.