Hmmm.
It looked OK and there was potential but I was put off by the voices... you'd imagine the line "DIE YOU MO'FO DIE" would be yelled blood-curdlingly but you guys whispered your lines as if the parents were in the house when you recorded it and you were afraid they might here y'all a-cussin'. It don't work. EG:
(whisper) Now is the winter of our discontent...
(army) Speak up!
(whisper) Fill the breech with our English dead...
(army) We're what? We're going to the beach? Ah cool!
That's why wars are loud ya see.