Reviews for Who Goes There? Part 3

[colinmoon]

An interesing piece of a bigger whole?

This is terrifying on so many levels--this looks like a good series to watch alone in the dark; my only problems are that the voice-overs are too quiet against the music, the dialogue seems jerky and unnatural ("how in the hell we stop it" would be better said "how in hell we stop it", for instance), and the fact that you could highly benefit from a spell-checker--the thing is riddled with misspellings and grammer problems. Like 'explotian' is really 'explosion', 'allright' is either 'alright' or 'all right', preferably the first one.

The concept seems scary enough, and I'm going to go watch the other parts now. Good job, but watch out for details.

GrimEntertainment responds:

Thanks glad you liked it, and I will watch out for details for next part, the subtiteling has been somewhat fixed now with the help of a word book (:
Thanks again!

[IvanDenisovich]

FOR THE LOVE OF MY SANITY

MAKE ANOTHER ONE! i love it!

GrimEntertainment responds:

I will and just for your sanity! :)
Thanks anyway iam really glad you liked it!

[TaliesinMidwest]

Amazingly well styled.

With the exception of the poor spelling in the subtitles, this was a very well put together piece. The originality of it is what scores the most points. Plus, the hell creature animation was done very well, even if the humans looked a bit robotic.

Oh yeah, and 1 humor point for the Alien allusion. ^^

GrimEntertainment responds:

Thanks glad you liked it, I trie to work more on the humans till next episode cause I see what you mean! i uploaded a new file with a more corect(i hope) subtitling...
Thanks again!

[Jar1head]

lol

that was fun to watch

GrimEntertainment responds:

Thanks glad you liked it!

[PatchouliGypsy]

Very nice!

I liked this a lot. I'm thankful for the subtitles as the sound was a little low, but I had no problems understanding it if I read along. The spelling errors were noticable, but I can understand completely as English is a very strangely contructed language if you're not a native speaker (if anyone would check his profile, he's from sweden, so don't dis his spelling)
The voice acting was not horrible, it was actually rather well done compared to a lot I've heard... the only thing I would have done differently is more inflection in the voices... like the soldier would probably sound more stressed out or alarmed when he was talking to the doctor... instead he sounded too calm and collected even though he just saw his comrade get sliced in half.

All in all, a damn fine job :)

GrimEntertainment responds:

Thanks alot! Glad you liked it! hopefully I have fixed the spelling errors in the updated file, and real nice of you to be understanding! The voice acting may be better till next part, I will hopefully be helped with the voices... and by the way I saw your art work at diviantART and pretty amazing pices of work!
Thanks again!