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Reviews for "Battle Pickup!"

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I found that to be "graphically pleasing" and i found it quite good too. Nice to see you respond to your reviews, i like authours who do that.
As for your attention span problem, i agree with ya, im 15 too and i've only been using Flash for about a month (trial). I find it easy to start a project, but when i get a better, fresher idea i tend to rush the rest.

Well done!

liam2317 responds:

Wow... you just said so perfectly what I end up doing every time! But like I responded to most people, I think for my next flash I will have to write out a story line and animate the whole thing... no matter how sick of it I get, in the end it should be worth it.
Thanks!

Great Visual Style

The animation style was smooth, but some backgrounds and plot could have really added alot.

liam2317 responds:

Thanks, yes i think my next flash should take place in the day time giving it a better back ground, and it will be longer since i plan on it having at least a bit of a plot.
thanks!

Stylish

That was great, the animation might take you forever to do but it pays off. Even if its short I enjoyed the clip, style was great, very cool, but not over the top, subdued and classy - something I like.

Wouldn't have minded it being longer and having more of a story, the only thing that tied it into a theme was the anarchy symbol on the truck.

nice work

liam2317 responds:

Yeah i had another part in it that made it clear that the US marines were fighting the anarchists but the annimation in that part, I didn't like too much and didn't really feel like re-doing, but no worries the next flash I creat will defintaely have some plot and lenght!
Thanks for all the great comments!

WTF

Sorry, but i hate "i-wasted-time-to-make-boring-but-good-looking-flash-animat
ions". So fuck you.

liam2317 responds:

well fuck you too! I want to see you make something better, then come back and say that and maybe some one will listen, or maybe they will check out your profile picture and change their minds and ignore you completely!

it was alright

it coulda used a story or more exploshions or mabie some words but other then that it was an alright job

liam2317 responds:

well you see my mic is a piece of crap so its hard to do words, next time I'll have more of a plot i promise! -thanks