Reviews for Ock

[XkwiziTOnE]

Summary...

This is interesting. You seem to be a flash artist in the making, there are a few things you should consider doing:

1. You must make it longer so there is something to see and understand further. You have something here that can express your thoughts and how you work.

2. Plot. If you are trying to identify the character give it a plot of knowing what he is and where he is comeing from.

3. The music theme was a nice touch, using music and sounds to express the thought and transformation of the charcter.

4. You have flash making skills and need to tweak it a little bit, so you can show more detail and interest into the flash. You want something to come to the viewer and be like wow thats really powerful.

Overall it wasnt bad and its something that needs to be worked a little. Thanks for your submission.

[Dalry]

Starts out great, then not so great

I love the style as it starts out, it really is interesting. The drawing especially catches my eye. Unfortionately as it goes on, the style degrades noticibly. I think if you spent more time on this and got a fair bit of practice with the animation, you could have something quite nice.

[Tomamo5]

yo

i gave u a higher score than normal cuz this is ur first flash and it is brilliantly drawn and gud style. u jus need to work on the animating part its not smoth enuf. but great work hope u make more flashes.
Gud Luck

[TheEternalShadow]

great character likeness

good work :)

[gASK]

Nice:)

I liked the style this movie is done in, your drawings were nicely done but what took the movie a bit down was the animation....I mean, there is precisely drawn character, but when he moves his hand, it just "moves" etc.... Try to animate the moves and it would be waaaay better....

Nice job anyway...

nightshade-pheonix responds:

Thankyou! I certainly intend to spend a lot more time on future animations - this was merely a learning curve for me.