Oh, that was great.
Wow. It started off a little slow, but then... hmm with the appearance of Dude 3 it started to pick up the pace. That was really brillant. I love it when he describes his own heart. The Barbara pictures were hilarious too. That was demented, and that's why I loved it. The ostrich thing was pure genius. That is currently the most random thing I've ever heard.
Your biggest problem is sound. Sometimes it doesn't synch and it sounds really mechanical.