not bad
the claymation was pretty well done, just the audio brought it down, funny lil tale.
Reviews for "The Green Blur"
whiskas1 responds:
ya sorry it just went weird when i exported it, im using the flash 8 trial, but i am getting the whole version in a while. i played it in flash and it worked fine...hmmm weird
Not bad
Graphics- the figures themselves could use some work, but your claymation is very smooth and fluid. If you had some better models to work with I think you'd be a great claymator. The backgrounds of the room and stuff was also very well done. You even had some sort of lighting set up. Very nice job.
Sound- It was extremely quiet and wasn't timed well with the flash. Work on that.
Violence- the zombie part was too quick and the ending could've been gorier.
Humor- the plot is extremely cliche and overused. I could see the ending coming from a mile away. I liked the little bone though.
Overall- I'm not a huge claymation fan but you are better than most. Better than Knox, at least
whiskas1 responds:
wow thanks you for the compliment..hmm better then knox? idk about that...maybe...but probaly not
I dunno nothing about clayanimations.
But what I can help you with is the preloader.
The preloader bar isn't showing, coz I is white. The background is white also. White colour doesn't show on white, does it? So paint the background darker, or choose another colour for the load bar for it to show up. (you can adjust the colour of the load bar by double-clicking the NG preloader, than unlocking the loadbar layer and paint it!)
whiskas1 responds:
thanks, ya ive been having ALOT of trouble with the preloader, thanks for the advice
Meh
Why is it called "The Green Blur"?
It was pretty good, although I haven't seen many clay animated movies so I can't properly compare it to something. Not bad, the sound wasn't all that good though. I really don't understand why it's called what it is either. That... thing that attacked the guy was black, right?
whiskas1 responds:
well yes, and no, it was green it real life. when i recorded the frames u could see him but now it turned black thru compression
err...
I like claymations but this one has low quality and
FUCKIN DARK
whiskas1 responds:
oh well the darkness IS THE POINT its a scary movie, ya