Newgrounds is not a place for rushed work
take more time. Do better job. it's not exactly the hardest formula in the world to figure out.
Newgrounds is not a place for rushed work
take more time. Do better job. it's not exactly the hardest formula in the world to figure out.
yeah i know and in the next one the text will be much bigger.
Good..Yet defective
This needed a loading screen. Otherwise, it was great.
Hmm
I didn't even noticed that it had the subtitle thing until the 2nd time viewing it, lol. You should increase that font. Other than that it was alright. Though sometimes that animation seemed choppy. Also looked like it was mostly just still pictures
Cool
It was really hard to read some of the text at the bottom. It was a bit too small for my tastes, and a little fast in some areas. If the story was meant to go that fast, it might be in your best interest to have spoken dialogue. You had a good storyline going, just elaborate more on them.
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you could have done better.... i can tell... you rushed ....