Reviews for total randomness

[Crusty-Wiwuh]

hmm...

I see many things like this: good drawing and the right ideas for animation, but the actual animation is choppy and confusing, possibly rushed. try to make your animation smoother by adding more frames to movement. make sure there are slight pauses at appropriate times so the viewer can realise what is going on. watch your movie and observe places where movement is unclear, then go back on work on that part. look at how you and other people move to get realistic movement. animation like this takes time and commitment which it didn't look like you used in this. If you really want to be good at animating, and produce something people will enjoy and admire, you have to keep practicing and spend time on what you do.

[Fakan]

Okay

Nothing too new or interesting. The dialouge could have been presented better. I dunno, I just didn't care much for this flash; sorry.

[Gpirate]

Another great flash!

All these Brackensood things are great. Especially the ones with Bitey. I love all of them, keep them coming! You're one of the best artists I've ever seen. You pwn.

[Warhammer]

Nicely done

The graphics and animations were well drawn. This is a good start for other sequels, maybe longer. Additions to add might be voices, background, and.. actaully thats it everything else was fine. that was funny, dude just wanted his pen back. I totally understand. I taclked a kid in the school hall because he put my lock on backwards. Anyway great flash, hope to see more.

[Lord-Barrius]

It could be better.

I would have found a longer and more elaborate fight scene before you cracked the joke at the end much funnier. As it stands, that was not terribly funny, and could use work.

HedgeDragon responds:

okay thanks, glad to hear some not so pleased viewers because that means that i have a long way to go and maybe make it to the real cartoon industry and thanks again.