Pretty good for a first flash...
A lot better than most of the first flashes uploaded here. The animation wasn't all that great, but the story- though simplistic- was good. Funny ending.
Reviews for "[ Mentos ]"
Good first flash.
Good first flash. It was pretty funny but it just didnt draw my attention and it was to short.
heh, funny.
I like the story. Although I have always hated those damn commercials. I want to see the character choke on the damn candy!
Um, pretty good for a first flash. You just need to spend a great deal of time on the annimations and graphics. The bazzoka just appeared, should have done the cartoon pull-out-from-behind-back trick I think.
Keep practiceing!
BillyTheHobo123 responds:
I'll keep that in mind next time, thanks!
Great Style
I like how you draw your cartoons (even if they arent the most advanced). Well done.
BillyTheHobo123 responds:
Thank-you very much.
haha
i liked it. pretty funny and good for a laugh or two. the animation wasnt detailed, but it didnt really need to be. if this is your first flash, then you did a great job. keep it up.
BillyTheHobo123 responds:
Thanks!