It's okay
That was pretty good for your first flash. But you should work on your english...
Reviews for "link vs zero"
Not bad, in fact I liked it
For a first flash this was fairly good. A decent little story, good action. Good pacing. Pretty darn good.
HOWEVER...your spelling is awful! Run your script through a spell check before you finalize it. Simple as that. There are so many spelling errors in this flash that I can't even begin to name them all.
Had the spelling been better, this would have gotten a 4 or 5 from me, as it stands...3.
Just keep it in mind for next time.
Good
Needs some improuvements in the spelling and grammar.
Nice one
You got my 5 this is very good for a first flash keep it up
Pretty good for a first time.
Pointing some things out:
Shitty dialogue, ugly text boxes.
However, the fight was pretty cool. I liked the combo counter. One thing I would have liked to see was Link using the power of the Triforce more. And I didn't really like the fact that Zero was evil in this movie.
But overall, you did a pretty good job. I gave it a 3/5. And remember: Spellcheck your dialogue. Use proper grammar. Single-color text boxes work well. I can't wait to see your future work!
kennymty responds:
thank you for your commments and about the history i had to invent a cause why link going to fight with zero . and about the spell i dont know much english