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Reviews for "Neverland [SyM Final Remix]"

whoa

its epic,beutifal,happy,and wierd all roled into one. keep up the good work my good sir!

syphonmax responds:

Thank you my good sir

Much better!

Not as empty, magnificently mastered, i think u know what u changed, u made it!
Anywayz, its better so yay

syphonmax responds:

I'm glad you like it more ^_^

FAIL LOL JK

awesome song dude make more of this i liked it

Chill but Bumpin!

The intro was epic, it drew me in, but as the lead comes in full at 00:55, i think you should some instrument(s) to highten the epicness, nothing buzzy but something distant and dramatic. I like how you slowly led in the vocals, but i think if you used a high-pass filter instead of a low-pass to lead it in, it would sound like the voice was sort of decending from the heaven's which could highten the dramatic intro. Also, they could be a little louder. Very good harmonic tone throughout the intro. Awsome lead in to the chorus, and yes, the chorus had me dancin! I don't feel like the transition starting at 01:46 wasn't properly introduced, the kick just suddenly cut out leaving me slightly confused. Adding a reverse cymbal there or changing up the instumentation at that point could help with that. Again, the voice starting at 01:52 was a little soft, and maybe that's what you were going for, but I found it hard to understand. 02:19 to 02:47 is just epic, very cool effects there. Everything else to the end is really good, I would just try to add more cymbal during this time, mainly for transitions. Awsome mix overall!

syphonmax responds:

Thanks man and I'll look into all the stuff you've mentioned ;)

nice feel, great emotion

the vocals really add to the song making it stand out from everyday trance- SMART-- i like the twinkle approach you used for the cute feel it gives it- very appropriate for your genre. you did a GREAT job on the buildup w/ the background synths and drum fills. i like @ about 2:50 the new synth melody its like the "finale" great tune, i'd add more catchy vocals to your next song though. what song is it originally though? the vocal portion that is

-DJOXY-

syphonmax responds:

The vocals are complete and the original song is Kate Lesing Neverland, there is a remix pack out and these are the complete vocals you get so there wasn't a lot to work with