cool
despite the ridiculous zoom, and how it ended so abruptly... I gave it a two...
to protect it
because, your sprite animation seems pretty good, just zoom out, and make sure whatever story you have planed is either funny, or cool... and not "this is gonna be so cool" cool... because thats not cool
y'know, where the dialouge is REALLY 1990's bad action flick...
anyway,... just... make it cool, live up to your good animation