Not good but not bad
it was good, the graphics could be better they look a bit pixilated . and on the start scrolling text bit. *turns into english teacher*
has gone on not has went on
intil -> until?
its vodka not vodca
instead of swearing use different words or delete them compltely there not always needed, i.e the bit where you moron is added, that could be taken out and would still be good
but overall a good effort :)
Sorry about that.=)
Atleast use the spell checker
The Idea wasn't that bad, but there was spelling errors all over it. And also, what the hell is a pimptrooper? and its Vodka not vodca. Nice try, but stick to your high school, flash is obviously not your thing.
Well, it doesn't seem to bee yours either.(1)Never use and in the beginning of a sentence ever.(2)A comma is supposed to used to show pause.Flash is obviously not you thing is supposed to be another sentence entirely.(3)I made the pimptrooper up to be funny.Like I said,"English isn't your thing either."
Craptastic
English Mother Fucker!
Do you Speak it?!!!
That killed the score.
Oh, wait... using a Sigma sprite with a storm trooper head also brought you down. And the horrible use of a "censor." You know you can say shit and ass. I found no humor in it at all either... Come back once you find out what comedy is.
And if you're going to use the name of an alcohol... please, for the love of God, spell it right. It's a K, not a C.
You know, I'm 13! I don't know how to spell the name of alcoholic beverage!!!It's ilegal! Well,I thank you for constructive review, but do you have to yell at people for them to get the point???
Bad
Tons of speling mistakes. Art/animation was bad. Why would a stormtrooper just stand there mid-stride? Sound was really staticy. Not funny, dumb idea. Also there has been more than one "Darth" Off of the top of my head: Revan, Malak, Bandon, Traya, Sion, Nihilus, Maul, Siddious, Dooku, etc.
People assume it's Vader since he's the most popular of them all.
perhaps maybe you should spend time on this
There was no voice acting . which i wouldnt have a problem with except all the grammer and spelling errors distracted me . i had to figure out what you meant.
Second you used 1337 speak which in a published working is gay especailly if we have to try and read it to figure out plot
orignally created characters would have been nice also thats a BIG 0 for all you 1337 |-|4X0Rs out there making gay films