work harder
I only smiled at the scene with the horse screaming, this isn't really funny.
you could have worked harder on the delivery with the jokes, "and then he hit him with a bagt of doornobs" if it doesn't sound funny when you say it it won't sound funny when others listen to it, and if that line sounded funny when you said it then I have nothing to look foward to.
I don't want to sound like a prick but I think you should work harder on your future projects.
I gave you a 2