EXCELLENT!
This piece is a PERFECT example of what one can get with hard work and a full understanding of Flash! The backgrounds are amazing and the characters' appearances made the piece that much more moody. The overall art style works well for the story. This show reminds me of Roger Corman's Poe series back in the day! The only room for improvement here is the sound. As per the creator, "... people will turn up the sound and get sucked into the story." The story itself should (and does!) suck the audience in. Amped up volume should be a choice made by the viewers, not a necessity. Making the audience kick up the sound in the middle is both annoying and distracting and can actually push them away since they'll believe they missed an integral part of the story. Keep the narrator on an audible level so your viewers just have to sit back and watch. Believe me, they'll be drawn in! Can't wait to see more!