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Reviews for "My Mechanical Nightmares WIP"

Hmmm

Normally I'm not a big fan of industrial music, but this is actually quite good!
Still, has a sort of FL studio feel to it.

aloneagainfriend responds:

I know, I know... I am an electronic artist after all.... I dont use guitars... just synths ran into Metal guitar amps, LOL!
Thanks!

I like it, but...

...but the voicey things in the beginning need to go. They seem to drown out and clash with the lead. Just... Yeah. Get rid of that and you'll have a download and 10/10

aloneagainfriend responds:

i tryed that already... i like it better there... I could maybe turn it down a bit orsomething.. :P ty

Hmmmm

Industrial not really my thing, but much of this sounds like its well done. I dunno what's up with the Volume fade thing in the middle, but aside from that this is a solid demo.

aloneagainfriend responds:

That fade out will be changed in the end. ty

I don't know.

I'm conflicted about what to say on this- I guess it fits the nightmare theme well yet it's seriously lacking in musical depth. Sort of a splurge of sounds that all muffle together.. I think you need some clarity, but it's an interesting song and not poorly executed. I guess I like it. More of a theme might help but it's a WIP.

Interesting. Cool.
Later,
Shrike

aloneagainfriend responds:

"Musical depth"? :P