Hey........
Im looking forward to part 2.
Reviews for "Mario's Future. part 1"
Fastluigi responds:
thanks! :) it shall come fast!
Not so good..
It looked like you tried, but you had terrible spelling, and it was too short.
Fastluigi responds:
im dutch, and 11,i dont know it all so good. sorry :( ill all take care of part 2
Pretty good
Not bad the story is pretty good,but you should try to do better with the graphics,you have a potential,i'l be hoping to see more from you.
P.S I AM A 13 YEAR OLD GO CHECK OUT MY MOVIES TOO!!!!
Fastluigi responds:
ok , i check ya movies!, and thx for the review :D
Could be better.
I suggest that you fix the grammar errors in this one before working on part two.
Grammar Corrections:
What happened with Luigi's room?
I should go check to see if he is okay.
You... You're not Luigi!
You can stop this Mario.
You can't hurt me, because I am completely frozen!
But it won't be easy.
Will Mario ever come back to the Mushroom Kingdom?
Fastluigi responds:
ok, ill take care of that in part 2 :)
well..
not really bad, but the storyline sucks...