holy shit!!
this is better then you first demo
anouther song added to my ipod i hope to see more of your music!!!
Reviews for "~Lost In The Void~"
DaveGuy responds:
woot! =)
Nicely done...
It certainly creates an atmosphere of being "lost in the void". So right off the bat this song delivers what it promises which is a very good thing.
And I agree with Iceblueglow. The FX do push back/repress the main vibe, if you will. Your trance lead synth needs to be a lil bit more varied because it almost never changes, only the FX Change (that's how they repress the main riff).
Don't get me wrong the song is great, but it is missing elements of a good "Techno" song that people couldn't help but dance to. (If I were to hear this at a party I'd change it...No offence intended).
For instance, the Back beat of the song doesn't have enough OOMPH! OOMPH! to it. And without OOMPH! you may as well give up. Without OOMPH you only ever hear the song, you won't listen to or feel it.
You need to get the song to tell a story and what do stories have?
A beginning, Middle and a FUC*ING good end. So the song might start off slow and slowly build up then right when you think its all over, you think have figured out the ending to the story...... BOOOOM! you add a twist to keep the story going. (Example- Changing the main riff/beat/lead guitar) Doing this will keep people interested which is what you want.
But then again if you created this song for gaming purposes then its perfect. Only because it creats such a great atmospher for a game!
All in all Great job man! kepp it up! 7/10
DaveGuy responds:
IT IS DONE!!
I have officially boosted the kick.
(rating review helpful as I speak) =)
mmmm
this song is the shit
DaveGuy responds:
thx
nice melody, wrong placed
nice melody's dude but you need some tips
1. what you definetly sense here is that the fx take the upper hand. of course it must be a little louder than the instruments but i think your track will be better when the fx-loudness is pulled down
2. it feels like youve compressed it alot. i dont know what kinda program u use but if its fl the i reccomend that you put your instruments volume a little lower to care for a better feel (altrough that doesnt mean the fx must take the upperhand again)
3. your lead synth is like a synth thats putted in the background. try to get an other patch for the lead (exept it was meant to be like that what i doubt).
im not an expert in giving reviews srry for that but i hoped it helped :)
DaveGuy responds:
I'm not an expert either but good review though. I think it was helpful so I will just rate it helpful anyway. =)
I love the break @ 00:48
good job! Puts me in a new place
DaveGuy responds:
thx man.