Im reviewing honestly here...
i really like salad fingers, so i thought this was going to be a great tutorial on how to draw him, but it wasn't - it does not actually show you how to draw him, like when you explain his wrinkles, where bouts' exactly? anyway, i didnt learn anything form this.
im voted 10 on graphics because the graphics were good, and 10 for sound because the salad fingers music is awsome and a 10 for interactivity because the programming was neat.
Yo sorry i deleted one layer please come back and vote
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Not too bad
Everything seemed fine, however the spelling and grammer were pretty bad. Also, I was expecting to be able to draw on the screen with that pencil icon. Try making a new verson with that feature!
Oh well, if my spelling is bad, you should see my brothers, he writes, because like this beacauese i tell him thats wrong and he says well its shorter, i say not thats not even shorter lol
Good
I think the flash is well done, but I am sorry to say that it does not teaches to draw the characters. Maybe it helps a little. But too little. I suggest you to use your knowledgment and talent to do something different. Cheers!
Give me an example please :) BUT VOTE HIGHER! :)
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.....<sound of air being sucked through teeth>...
<Takes Deep Breath>
1. Full stops are not hard to use and are lacking considerably.
2. The shape is an oval, not overal.
3. Capital letters at the end of sentences.
4. The word is pick, not pic.
5. For the love of god...its WRINKLES, not winkles!
6. The word is remember, not remeber.
7. When talking in the possessive, the word is his, not hes.
8. The word is you'll, not ull.
9. The word is hunch, not huntch.
10. The verb is know, not no.
11. The word is because, not becuase.
12. The word is puppets, not pupets
.....em, I could go on. Seriously though, if you want to make your flash animations look any way professional, use half-decent grammer.
Other then that, the flash was actually pretty good. If I was you, I'd release it again however this time using a dictionary.
One final tip, learn to take criticism. Its not particularly good natured if you give abuse to every reviewer who doesn't like your work.
p.s. Apologies if you're illiterate/dyslexic ect. No harm intended.
I understand, but some of thoes thing you said is just for short, like no insted of Know, and 2 insted of two, I also understand the other things you said like because, thats just a type error, but you can still read it, even if it is spelt wrongly, but the question is did you learn any thing, if yes then vote on that, if no then your welcome to vote as you have done, however im sure you did learn something
Well well
Appearantly the autor of this movie is a little gay fairy boy from his replies to reviews :o
You submitted a movie, so you wanted it criticized, wanted to only get good reviews? Only cheers, and worships, and whatnot...?
Go suck off a donkey fag.
hay the review are for saying how i can improve it, not saying its crap, ur supposed to say why is it crap, i bet you dont even no the meaning of the word review and ur how old? 16!, how sad can u get, and at least when the other people complain, they say how you can improve it, Go look up, in the dictionary, what review means, u prik!
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