Good first try...
For a first try, I think it had a somewhat decent outcome. However, I'm kinda getting sick of people saying, "Please vote high, it's my first movie!" The way I see it, when I release my first flash piece, I'm going to want people to be honest when they vote for it... but that's another subject. Anywho, this was okay, and the effort was there. I'd work on sound and originality, though. The Portal's gettin' kinda flooded with little movies of guys getting bludgeoned and stuff...
VERY VERY CRAPPY.
I know it is yer first flash. But this crap SUCKS BIG *^%@! Try hard and if you can't get it right don't submit it to NG.
Shit of shits.
This was crap! But not the worst I've seen this week, and I come everyday. Good; no one trying for the turd position should receive it. This Shit award was earned. Good for the author.
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I gave you what I did for one simple reason. YOU DID NOT RESORT TO FUCKING STICK FIGURES FOR YOUR FIRST FLASH. Thank you.
This isn't so good.
Your animation is bad, so are the sounds. This isn't so funny as you taught.
~juraj