Extremely good for your first real movie I think.
PRE-LOADER!!! In your next movie I expect a pre-loader, it's extremely annoying waiting on a white/black screen mmkay?
The movie itself was good, but there was no 'oomph' and there was a few spelling mistakes but I suppose I can't put that on you, as everyone makes mistakaes. Well done.
Nice for a first try, but....
The pacing of the feature seemed kind of slow. And there wasn't much to what little I saw. Nice try though.
before you put your the finished product up.
You should put all text you use into a word document and check the spelling. Then send it to a friend to check the grammar for you.
Some of the drawings were really good. Others, like the house up close, should be redone.
For a preview...
not bad at all, I really enjoyed the atmosphere the music and the writing created, problem are the graphics, they are not bad but not as good as they could be... I'm really looking forward for the finished project, good luck with that!
EEN NEDERLANDER!
*Geeft klopje op de rug*
Ik dacht hmz, een 1e flash. Free blam points!
Maar toen laadde hij en ik was echt zo van WTF...
Geweldig, kan niet wachten op het echte filmpje.
haha, thanks gast :P ik ben nu met het echte filmpje bezig dus hopelijk schiet dat een beetje op :D