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The composition is really good, actually. Some of the piano fills are wicked. I don't know if they're fills, but that's all I can think to call them at the moment.
It still doesn't feel like it builded up to what it could have around 4:25 ish, though.
And there seems to be a lack of high end, for my taste anyway, when the kick is introduced.
yes
Sensational and lovely melodies, typical for you :). This is great dude, but there's a few things that once you work on, the record labels will be all over you. Your build ups are incredible. Nothing short of fantastic and masterful, however the refrains in your songs are kind of disappointing. I expect them to be hard hitting and even more emotional than the build ups, but they are weak. At 1:50, the hat sounds like it's like 32kbps quality or something, i dunno.. at 3:57, the clap is really weak and doesn't blend well with the kick. Just improve your use of percussion and after the build ups, rip the bass, perc, synths, everything really. If you played this at a rave, people would fall in love with the build up, but after that it's kind of a let down. It needs to powerful enough so people are stoked as fuck after that build up and they start jumping their fuckin asses off! Seriously I can imagine this bringing people to their knees at a rave. Corny I know but just work on those things dude. You are a prodigy with building atmosphere. Mastering could also use a wee bit of work along with less use of nexus presets, but these things come naturally in time.
thanks for the tips, I'll be sure to work on improving the areas you pointed out.
lol, I don't use nexus. In fact, I hate nexus cause you can't create your own presets for it. I use sylenth1, and make pretty much all my presets from scratch. I suppose it just sounds a lot like nexus cause of the type of lead I use in a lot of my stuff.
do you have an msn? I'd love to chat with you about music.
Yeah, I like this.
I like this. This is good stuff. Bet you're proud of yourself for making this! Congrats with the record deal(Hey, better late than never, eh? xD)
Its Good
Not your best work but its good a soft song it felt like a 5 minute build up to be honost 4/5 8/10 downloaded