Not bad
Yeah, good work. I like the frog best too! Maybe a spinoff flash?
Reviews for "Death of Masaki"
Holo-Alf responds:
Thanks, but your my BROTHER.
Wickeds
This is the best thing I have ever seen, fiven out of fiven. The frog guy was my favourite.
Holo-Alf responds:
Yeah, just made a flash about Steven Hawking in about 2 hours, looks like it's gonna get blammed...
6.5
A short film in the vain of a classic samurai flim wiht a woman named Masaki hell bent on destroying everyone in her path. What is her reasoning for the murder? Will someone be able to beat her at her on game? It is a fun concept, and while it has been done adnausem, there is still room for originality. The artwork could really use some improvements, especially in the close up shots as some of the characters were a bit underdeveloped. That being said, the shots from rather far away were fine and their definately were an ample amount of them. I liked your use of sound effects, they were quite fitting. Keep up the good work, you can only continue to imrove.
Ryan
Holo-Alf responds:
Thanks for the constructive critisism, I never really considered pursuing flash to any really high level, but I might just try and make something more ambitious as a result of your encouragment! Thanks!
not bad one
it was an alright animation. fun to watch, but it was way too short....
finally something good
thank god for you is all i can sayy the last 20 flashes have been so shit i thought i would cry, one minor thing though try to get you characters to bend their arms and legs. apart from that it was way cool
Holo-Alf responds:
Thanks! I promise I will one day make knees and elbows. Actually, I could make it my thing NOT to do them coz you're the second person to point that out to me!