It's alright
You're flash wasn't that great it was just the song that made it good.
Reviews for "I found it on eBay"
COPY
This is copied and fucking shit I cant belive you copied such a gd song originaly wrote by "Wierd Al"
what a fuck wit!
MetalMario responds:
I said this was by weird al, "fuck wit!"
Pretty Good.
I liked it for one reason. I could understand what they were saying for a change
Just trying to be constructive
The only problem I have with this submission is that all it is are images of what Weird Al is saying flying across the screen. A music video should tell a story (of course that'd be kind of hard with this) involve some sort of creative expression or something of the like. Something unexpected. It's much too easy (on paper, I know Flash and sychronization are hard, so kudos on that) to just string a bunch of pictures to words being sung. But Weird Al is the best, so you get a 10 on sound :) Also, I like the light switch being used for the word "on". At any rate, I thought it was all right. I watched it for the song. Next time try Hardware Store. It not only tells a story, but involves lots of items you could use pictures for :P Good effort, and I hope you go on to make bigger, better productions.
me too, why?
graphics - you did a nice job hunting down the mentioned items, but you did nothing but import them and motion tween...
style - erm... shoulda done... something...
sound - neat song, but nowhere near Weird Al's full potential (nor even near his mediocre) considering the vast array of strange things on e-bay (I saw someone selling a used air guitar, and also I found a dried peach shaped like a vagina)
violence/interactivity - non applicable
humor - most of the humor (and there's not really much, sorry) comes from the song... it was kind of neat to see that you actually found some of the stuff he mentioned, but most of the stuff he mentioned would be pretty easy to find I think.
overall - I didn't blam, but honestly, it was very good. You just didn't do enough with it.