Better
I watched your one before, and this is better, the graphics are great, but prehaps a backing track would be nice.
I've tested it and i reccomend linkin park's faint, then it should scratch off the track when "nail factory" unveils.
That would be better, otherwise, the sounds could be improved with a sign falling sound.
Otherwise, good short, and good stick animation (better than most).
James Prankard Inc