I liked the style.
I liked the stained glass imagery, and the background music was peaceful. However, I don't think that NewGrounds is a good place for this. While it is of good quality, it is slow paced and will lose a lot of viewers. Also, you will probably end up getting your feelings hurt because of making this. There will be a lot of anti-Christian responses to this, and I hope you don't end up in a flame war with them, because that would just be stupid. Take your skills and apply them to something that isn't going to attract as much controversy or as many rabidly-set-in-their-way Godhaters.