Excellent EXCELLENT!
This is brilliant. You took the time to work on the scenes you kept and you just made them work. Even the stuff I didn't like when I read it, came out funny. Everything was funny in this!
I don't deserve script credit though. I just did Starscream's voice. The stuff I fiddled with aren't in this one well except for that "YOU FOOL!" line Star scream had.
I like the edits you made to Starscream's sounds. "YOU RULE!" Ha ha. I didn't even get a chance to say that since my computer had to go and die. Great splicing.
Also I apologise! I thought it was Soundwave who had the part with the english accent and the top hat, not Shockwave. It worked though I think. Even the end with Prime. That came out great!
;-: O man you captured the characteristics of Soundwaves loyal tape decks perfectly. It made me cry. HHAHAHA ! I don't remember reading that in the script.
I also love the thing where Megs and Soundwave were tossing Spike around! BRILLIANT! And it was nice to see Bumblebee's little commentary about decepticons at the end as well. So much greatness. I'm thinking that Decepticons are funnier then Autobots after watching this. But Prime's got a funny mean streak in him that is also comedic gold. :D
Sorry it took so long for me to watch this. :( Damn friggin computer.
Well anyway you did a great job. If you have the time Email me and let me know if you are going to do the extra, bonus scenes.