Great concept, but....
it could have been a lot better. It was too short, and the violence was very limited. You could have made it better. Also there was a point where there was no music or sound, it's better to have more sound than silence, you should fix that. Lastly, the ending was pretty random. Outta no where some guy comes and shoots him in the face. I didn't like the ending very much. But don't let my review discourage you, just take the critisism in a good way and try to use it to improve upon yourself. Keep trying and you're next one could be much better. Also I've noticed you've responded to a couple of reviewers, could you respond to mine so I could see what you have to say about my review? Thanks!