Great!
Although it could be longer, it was pretty well made ^^ ==b
Reviews for "Magus Bros Shorts 2"
ShadowWarriorLuke responds:
It's already 7 minutes. o_O Anyway, glad you liked it.
good story
as my titles says it was a great story, the dialog was pretty good with a great relation ship between magus and mario, it was also a bit funny in there to with the flash back and some other text was ok. The animation was ok, it wasnt anything to rave about it seemed very simple nothing moved that much but it wasnt to bad of animation either, the sound wasnt bad but i wished for voice overs, but the text was easy to read and it stayed on screen just long enough to read it, and the ending was great also, over all it was pretty good.
ShadowWarriorLuke responds:
I'm glad I got the text speed right on this one. Voices I'm still not sure about adding as I've not seen many Mario flashes that have a good voice actor for Mario (then again I'm probably looking at the wrong ones).
I do agree that the animation was a bit simplistic in parts but oh well. The next one will probably see a proper intro anyway once I get ideas for it. Thanks for the comments.
koo
Pretty dam cool man, keep up the good work.
ShadowWarriorLuke responds:
Will do, thanks.
Well
I laughed, I cried (because of so much laughing) and I think you did a great job!!! You should definetly make loads more.
ShadowWarriorLuke responds:
Guess I'd better get to work then. =P
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~~REVIEW~~
Takes me back to my old mario playing days, but anyways it was funny with the convo between the two, the text bubbles coud be abit larger though hard to read so little, maybe some voice-overs would help on this...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
while there was Text bubbles this could have been much better with some voice dialog of the characters it would be much better then just having to read a bunch of stuff...
~~OVERALL~~
A good gjost house mario themed flash...
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ShadowWarriorLuke responds:
Well I'm somewhat reluctant to put voices in this series to be honest. I'll increase the text size a bit for the next episode though. Thanks.