Very very nicely done my man!
Big inprovment from the last one...you did cut down on the melodrama in this part. But I think its still a little "narutoy" for it to be a true MMZ thing...
But since I have played and beat all four MMZ games, I can say that you do well with the plot. But I still would like to see Elpizo make an appearence...he was a total badass (and the hardest first form of the final bosses...when he transformed he failed it as Origional Zero-Omega was harder IMO)