Not bad.......
You did pretty good. The drawings could use some tweaking but you already pointed that out. Just keep practicing your drawing and I'm sure you'll get better in time. The song was awesome. You did spend too long on the guy with the mustache and it was getting boring at that point.
Cool...
This is really nice dude. The music is fantastic too. Will be waiting for the next submission dude. Cheers for the work well done. Bravo!!!
That music
You probably already know this, but there was a computer game a few years ago called Nightmare Ned. I remember this music from that game! It kicks ass!
Average
You should have used text/audio went people talk but the background audio is well used. When the John walk to the door the legs move kind of sloppy ...
made me laugh
When he was walking to the door, it was so crap that i actually laughed quite a bit. for that reason, i liked it! haha. most of the drawings were not too bad, just work on the animating and maybe shorten it so the music suddenly stops when the robot opens its eyes or something.