Good for your first but...
Its kinda lacking abit. Maybe try improving the way the characters limbs and stuff are put together. Also, some parts looked too sloppy, I know you were kinda going for a sketchy style but, if you would have tooken a little bit more time on this, it would have been amazing.
This is good
this is very good i like it i ike how dark it is and how the music and flash go well together good job and keep it up
Excellent job with it
This was a well made music video. It's abstract, to a degree, as 99.9...% of vids like this are. Anyone who votes this low and is just like "omg this suxor!!1! blam it" (caps removed there) should just go fucking die; it isn't helpful. Fine if you don't like the movie, but give good, constructive criticism--and this goes for everything. The animation style was incredibly unique, which I enjoyed about it. And yeah the flame effects were slightly "lame," but for me it didn't really detract from the theme.
nicely done but sad
yeah this was a well made animation. it was very dark (although ive seen darker)... on second that the animation wasnt THAT good but the drawing made up for what the animation didnt. It was also easy to understand but not too easy. just enough to make it creepy.
Tips
Okay, I have to be truthful to you, this wasn't very good. Only good thing on this was the still pictures. As I was watching this, I thought, "Wow, this is so sloppy." However, I also know that this is your first time. You should look at the fire tutorial too, because I also thought, "Oh no! the house is being attacked by blue squiggles." Also, try not to make the characters sing along, it's pretty cheezy. I felt this was a sloppy music video, but heck, just practice, find new techniques, get tips from really good animators, etc.