Pretty good work.
I think the only thing were the spelling and grammar errors. It wouldn't hurt to give your shit a spell check before submitting it. It doesn't help when I have twenty plus spelling and grammatical errors staring me in the face. Otherwise, totally awesome work.
Nevermind the mindless.
I loved it, don't care about what others say. this is great work, please make more. good job!
Good, but...
I liked basically everything but the way you drew the characters... But the surroundings and backgrounds and stuff were really well done. Congradulation on those.
So...Awesome...
This...was awesome! Awesomely awesome, that is. The only thing I didn't like was the voices-too similar-but other then that, this is a piece of work you can be proud to have spawned.
An improvement
A great improvement over the first one, but the voices could still use a little work, as could the horrific spelling/punctuation errors (in the subtitles especially).