Pretty Good
It wasn't horrible, but the storyline was strange. And I'm into strange, but confusing-type strange is, well, strange. The animatioon was pretty good, but when, say, Green punched that guard into the wall in the first scene, the wall had a forshortened square in it. It would've been better to do full sprites. (It would be that hard to make a sprite hole...) All in all, good job!
Pretty good
This is really good for your 4th animation. I have some little changes you coul have made though. The music didnt really fit on some fighting scenes and the text was too fast for me to read. But other than that...kickass! PEACE!
YOu know, actually quite a decent flash but...
GRAMMER
DECENT DIALOGUE
LEARN THEM
Seriously, I don't believe you're 17 and talk like that, and with the kinda noobish posts you have. You're good at flash though, but really, DId you fail english class or something? Or do you have trouble distinguishing THe internet from a midnight chatroom with like 7 other people all half asleep? The flash is no exception either, make the dialogues more coherent than somestupid conversation on AIM, LIke you'd do with a real movie.
Yea sorry about that im gonna re submit it later on before i release the next one. but thanks for the heads up
Impressive.
You must have a taste for sprite animation and action like that guy who makes "Sonic's quest for power". I liked the story and sprites and all the backgrounds but the text was a bit too fast. It would be better if you added a text button to go to the next one. Anyway I liked it.
PART TWO IS NOW UNDER JUDGMENT
hmmmm...
one of your only problems is your one of 1,000 people that copy DBZ.