what was the music
what was the music that played when it said "Episode 1"
good flash.
what was the music what was the music what was the music.
Reviews for "Irving"
awww
poor bastard
You just cannot dislike a socially awkward bee!
Heh, heh - two great ideas:
- a socially awkward bee
- represented by a "sleazy image" in a generally slick flash
Plus a great parody of a dimwit teenager dialog "yeah, cool, like, yeah cool" - it felt almost overrealistic. Great work indeed.
Bzzz
Great art the flash was nice :) The only thing retarded was the bee Irving and the way he looked :P Too bad its the last it was really nice for a short flash. Hope to see more of something different since this is your last for this bee.
Mixed feelings
There are a lot of great things about this flash - first of all, Irving is absolutely hilarious - his voice, the way he's drawn, everything. Don't change a thing about him for future episodes. Also, the graphics for everything else are extremely well-done. The music is fitting as well.
I was really liking this cartoon until the other bees began to talk. Then I started thinking "eh... ok, maybe it'll get better... damn, it was doing so well up until now". A bit of a spoiler, basically - why didn't you make them talk about something funny? There's only ONE queen in the bee hive anyway, so them talking about Jessica made no sense at all. You should've made them talk like really serious workers about typical bee topics, not made them into some whiny high-school kids. That would've made the contrast between them and Irving even funnier - here are these deadly serious, stuffy bees (so serious that they do not hear or see what CANNOT BE THERE - I'm thinking the stiff-upper-lip type of people here), and then there's Irving.
Also, the voice of the first bee who spoke was just really annoying - brings to mind some empty-headed high school girl who thinks she's "all that".
Still, this is a very well-made flash overall. There are just a few things about it that I think could've been done better.