childish
the jokes were a bit childish even with the the adult humor. but it did some what make me feel like i was watching futurama for a while.
Reviews for "Jot + Jab Episode 1"
needs work
I think you need to show some of the action rather than have the characters zoom in and just explain what happened. Very boring. The voice acting was nice however. You need to work on comic timing and delivery. I can tell a lot of work went into this I just think that it needs a tune up or something.
RAB has set my standards too high
Comparing this to RAB is ridiculous but here goes. COMPLETE DISAPPOINTMENT. You can do better Dave.
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i was thoroughly disappointed.