Hmmm...
It wasnt too bad and nither too good
Hmmm...
It wasnt too bad and nither too good
Hmmm
It was alright. There isnt really much humor in these. Was that on purpose. The art isnt really what I go for, but setting that aside, you have a fairly good story, if you excuse the fact he should have exploded in space in the first episode. With a few minor adjustments you could have something.