This was nice
Is that you playing or a program?If it's a program it sounds awesome.Anyway if it was you playing excellent job.
Reviews for "Peaceful dreams"
Pyrostudios responds:
Thanx read the response bellow to see the story
Judge Review---||\SU-146/||
Yeah, a cool piano piece! Pretty tight, and fun to listen to. Some great features put into it as well. On to the review!
Originality: A nice piano piece, and only piano, done in such a mind blowing way. It reminded me of a dramatic part of a soap opera or something of the sort. What seemed like a 32-note section with the melody intertwining with the bass, that part was especially beautiful.
It wasn't an entirely peaceful dream. It seemed to have it tense moments of glory, or anger, like you did something cool, things went peaceful, then it was all blown up in the end. This isn't bad, but this really didn't reflect the name of your song. I think "Broken Dreams" would be a better title, but that's my personal opinion. Then again, when I think about it, it could be "peaceful" death, in which case, makes more sense.
It's just so cool how you made this sound, the melodies, the bass notes, just--so--beautiful, wow, spectacular.
Originality Score: 25/25
Diversity: This piano piece reflects towards the zenith of Newgrounds piano pieces in this category. Though just piano (I wish more instruments could be added!) this was very much a pretigious piece that caught my attention. You didn't bother explaining the surroundings of your story, you dove right into it, which was really nice. An intro can turn someone off if they don't like it, but getting right into a good story is a great thing!
I really don't see anything entirely off right here. It could have been nice to hear more depth and power, but otherwise, I remain speechless hear.
Diversity Score: 23/25
Clarity: There is a part before you crazy on the 32 part where a piano note seems to get slightly distorted. I don't know whether that's done purposely for effect, but it might turn some people off. Otherwise, good.
Clarity Score: 22/25
Effort: Yes! I can see with all the work you've done, it was worth it, a great amount of work went into this piece. Even though there seems to be a lack of depth and power due to intstrument lack, it still stands out as a voiceful speech!
Effort Score: 24/25
Overall Score: 94/100
Awesome job. This really shines among Newgrounds, too bad it isn't on the Classical front page, it really deserves a lot of attention. Just awesome. Keep it up!
||\SU-146/||---Peace Out...
That sounds really nice.
It's really peaceful. Some of it reminded me of the "Gilmore Girls" theme song, haha. But most of it is really nice and original. I want to make a flash cartoon with that about something but I'm too lazy, hahaha. Well, I liked this though. Good song.
Nice keys!
Great work - I'm basing this review off of the assumption that you played it yourself - Absolutely fantastic work. I see that you're interested in the collab - based on this you'll get my rocommendation in a second...
Nice job - I'm voting 5
Please don't ruin this and let me find out that this isn't really your work...
Pyrostudios responds:
thanx i started out playing it myself and when i recorded it it came out REALLY CRAPPY not the playing the quality there was a bunch of static and shit so i recomposed it onto the program. but i am glad u liked it!
Sweet!!!!!!
This is quite an amazing pice of audio and the only thing holding me back from giving that fat 10 is that there needs to be done more with tempo and velocity...first of all, i needs to be a bit slower and then just if you regulate the tempo here and then to just give it a more dynamical and more handplayed-like feeling. Trust me it will add a LOT of "feeling" to the song. And then just a bit work with the velocity/softness because it needs to be a bit softer at the end making it sound really like "this is the end of this song".
Otherwise sweeeeet song.
Techno 7
Pyrostudios responds:
k i will do that!