ok that was gay but funny
really funny but i think it needed more to it
Reviews for "Naruto adventure 1"
i was about to say
what a boring pile of shit! but the sonic element u added in really jazzed it up a bit! nice work! also the text waz a bit fast sometimes.
and also its pronounced chunin
Alrighty...
I guess since you are learning English I can let some of the grammar pass, but you need to find a better way of making the subtitles work. For one, no capitals at the start really make it look crude, and it really doesn't work very well. The big black circle also doesn't look nice. Find a better way of showing it, other then that not a bad submission.
Great!
Looks like the start of a nice Naruto adventure! Simple scenery, clean sprites and a tense plot too, the mix of VG characters is pretty interesting as well, and unique, for all I know. Keep up the good work!
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totally
i agree with uh000 bad english