pretty sweet
i like it you couldnt made luigi splat it woulda lo0ked cool
but noises and stuff woulda also helped but it was cool
pretty sweet
i like it you couldnt made luigi splat it woulda lo0ked cool
but noises and stuff woulda also helped but it was cool
Thank you for the review.
I'll try to add more sound effects in my next flash, thank you for your opinion.
Funny....just not funny enough :(
I'm a big fan of VG parodies, especially Nintendo^^ so I've seen quite a few. It was a good concept and your animation was good too, but I think your scripting and comedic timing were not quite up to par. Like you could have made Goomzilla smash a few more things than just Luigi. I know I would if I was a giant Goomba! I wouldn't mind seeing more submissions in the future, but just work on that all important timing and possible creating a little tension. It helps to not take things in such an obvious direction....but if you do, make it undeniably obvious and throw in a little extra random background stuff..... no half way stuff. So overall not too bad ^.^ Keep at it.
Thanks for your lengthy review.
I agree with everything you said completely, and I'll definately work on everything you've said, I appreciate your criticism.
This animation really sucked
Im sorry to say, but this wasnt a very good animation. It took too long to load for something that idiotic to come out. But try again alright?
Sorry that you didn't enjoy it.
The long loading time is mostly because of the mp3's used in it which had fairly large filesizes, isn't much I can do about that without ruining the quality.
bot bad
nothing too new or too old.
its ok for your first 4/10
I loved it, and I hated it.
There were good things, and bad things. Teh good thins were, it was funny right up until the end, where it was bit anti-climactic, and I loved the Wind Waker music. The bad things were, of course, not a good ending, the wind waker music kind of distracted you from the Mario theme, and took too long to load. Change it up a bit, and try again.
Thank you for the review.
Sorry about the humor, I'll try and think it out more next time, you could say I sort of rushed the ending, which is probably the reason for the messy background and the sloppy ending.