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I appreciate that you're trying to take your work to a more serious level, but this really has a lot of flaws. 1) Aside from the woman, the characters look too comical. Its hard to take it seriously when they just don't look seriously drawn. 2) The penetration scene was unnecessary and seemed to be thrown in for shock value more than anything. 3) Moonlight Sonata is a beautiful composition, but its overused. 4) All the character's sounded like the same person, and I don't even know who the other two men are. Are they his father and brother or what? I'm guessing the woman is his wife, but he looks too young to be boffing a woman that age. 5) Ending music was completely inappropriate and not in that good, contrasting kind of way. It just didn't fit at all.
This is my constructive criticism of the film. I think you can probably do a lot better than this if you improve in those areas. I will say that the animation, sound quality/synching was well done, and I'll echo myself in saying again that I appreciate you trying to do something more than a dumb video game parody, bad anime music video, clock crew flash, or just random waste of time. Keep trying, I know you've got it in you.
-justin