If I had kids
I'd tell them that story. Great work!
If I had kids
I'd tell them that story. Great work!
Whoa, thank you so much!
nice story
Nicely done. The graphics fit the theme of the piece very well.
You had a couple of misspelled words that I noticed: "catastrophe" and ... drat, I don't remember for certain ... it was something like "clumsyness" instead of "clumsiness."
I wanted a narrator at the beginning. Then, somewhere during the training scene, Donovan started doing the narration in the style of the spoken part of "Hail Atlantis" in my head, and I was glad you didn't have one, because it couldn't have been better than that was.
I'm Dutch... so I kinda make those mistakes every now and then ^_^
But thanks! I'll correct them.
And a narrator would be awesome....but I have a horrible voice and no microphone ^^;
Thank you very much for your review!
cute!
Nice lil positive message for the kids!
Erg mooi gedaan.
Heel erg gaaf! Lief, en grappig, en nog diepgang ook. Verder zagen de graphics er ook goed uit. Zonder meer een goed geslaagde flash. 4/5.
lol
A cool concept, and well excecuted. very funny. nice job