sad but true
wow, it was really funny
Reviews for "Red Bull"
Renegade-Hamster responds:
Thanks.
I wish I had something else to say.
But I don't.
not too bad...
if you want an honest review, this could have been a great entry if youd have added sound. if you go onto the NG BBS, you can find, under clubs and crews, a group called the voice actors guild... they will make you sound clips for your flash, in return for credit for their voices being used. it will make this entry a possible frontpage, easily.
Renegade-Hamster responds:
No thanks. I can make my own sounds. I just didn't. I admit, I was lazy.
Plus, I didn't think it needed sound at the time.
Nice take on an old ad.
Animation true to the original adverts, with a better slogan in my opinion. lol nice joke renegade hamster.
Renegade-Hamster responds:
My name... IS THOMAS!
Actually, it's Dan, but I've always wanted to say that. Don't ask why. I just have.
*sniff*...so sad...
...short but sweet.
Animation was a bit crap, I'm guessing it took about 0.2 seconds to make.
Now let's hope they ban those dang ads!
I hate them so much.
I do!
The French had the right idea! Ban the stuff!
...but I digress...
Keep up l'good work.
Renegade-Hamster responds:
Yeah, there isn't a lot of work in this one. I made it between the hours of 12.00am and 2.30am, and later added sound.
Thanks for the review.
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Was that a great twisted joke or what!, man you really nailed that joke. The graphics were simple but you were going for the whole red bull advertisement feel so you did really well. I thought that the character designs were the highlight of this flash i was cracking up half at the joke and half at the funny looking characters!, and lastly maybe a way to have improved on this would have been the inclusion of a voice over at the end so you could have read out the line.
~X~
(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)
Renegade-Hamster responds:
A voice-over, eh?
...That's a great idea!
Well, it's an okay idea. But I didn't think of it. That's just what is missing from this toon. Thanks.
P.S. Any and all ideas submitted to the author Renegade_Hamster (Hereafter, RH) are now property to RH. By submitting your idea, you have agreed to releasing all intellectual property rights in relation to "The Voice Over Idea" to RH, and giving him power of attorney. You may wish to contest the parameters set out in this legal document, however, doing so will result in civil action and/or a gangland style execution not necessarily ordered by RH.
Love and Smooches,
A. Genuinelawyerofsomekind