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Reviews for "Ryan and Jonny - Cake"

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~~REVIEW~~
Well what can i say it was funny but needs some fine tuning more depth and detail and more time to improve on, but it was funny and did make me laugh so it was not all bad...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort ith each area and more detail for sure...

~~OVERALL~~
Something with an ok idea just needs more time and more effort...

~X~

hmmm

Not bad for a first...but its obviously not a first claymation just first flash...sooooo, ye. Its ok

Nice, but needs work

Very good for a first time, I suggest working on your figures though, such as smoothing them out. And the voice acting. While it was fine I feel it could be very easily turned up a notch to increase the overall goodness of the movie.

bluepaw responds:

You're right. Thanks for noticing.
:-/
bluepaw

woo

lol