it was ok
This movie was aliright it is better than my movies i make........
Reviews for "Weapons of Angels 1"
That was really good
That was really good, especially since its ur first flash. The only problem i had with it was the character design, he was very bland and not much to see. But good luck int he future.
Liked it
Just a few things that caught my eye.
1. In the begining text the arrows scrolled differently than I would think. (Not saying that they were wrong, just how I would scroll...)
2. Lasers could be a bit longer/faster. This is just my oppinion.
3. The NEXT button could be a bit prittyer (I know that I spelled it wrong)
4. The ending present seemed to be made a bit fast.
The ending could be cordinated with the music. Thats jist a little thing.
This is a good flash overall. Sorry if I was a bit negative. Thats just my nature ;). Looking for part 2.
LonLonRanch responds:
Thanks for the tips, and i fixed the ending music, it was really just a mess up in the upload, try it again, it should work
well done
i cant wait for the next one. see if the Angels can let him keep the wepon next time just so the very nice drawings dont go to wast.
fix the sound tho, voice acting and some sound affects other then the sabers and guns whould be nice.
Very Good
For your first flah animation, that was extremley good!